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Poems of want/desire: I'm trying to write pieces that move toward something, rather than push away. Title pending.


Edit: Semi-colon is now a colon. Moved out of scraps.
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iPawed Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
short and sweet, and it fits what you want - it moves towards.

i think i like this most because it's not trying to be anything more than simple honesty. you could fancy it up with pretty words or a line or two more but it doesn't need it and won't really gain anything from it.

though, i guess you know that more than i do.
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I think I'm about to find a voice to comfortably settle into now -- one that's careful and honest and clean. <3
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iPawed Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this was said over a month ago now, so show me what you've been up to :P
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Note comin' your way~
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